If your students already understand sentence fluency, this is a great sub folder/emergency worksheet. If sentence fluency is something you are introducing them to, this is a good mini-lesson because there are several examples involved.
>Appropriate for grades 6-9 >Example paragraph with poor fluency, then re-worded to improve fluency >Brief explanations of what made the fluency poor and improved. >Two independent practice exercises >One cooperative/peer activity >3 pages
Use this as a template and make the exact same exercise, just change-up the poor fluency examples for other six traits topics. Great practice for improving fluency!