If your students already understand sentence fluency, this is a good sub folder/emergency worksheet.
If sentence fluency is something you are introducing them to, this is a great mini-lesson.
> Appropriate for grades 6-9 > Example paragraph with poor fluency, then re-worded to improve fluency > Brief explanations of what made the fluency poor and improved. > Two independent practice exercises > One cooperative/peer activity > 3 pgs
> Use this as a template and make the exact same exercise, just change-up the poor fluency examples for other six traits topics. Great practice for improving fluency!